Week 8 Comment Feedback

I have been enjoying reading the comments left n my stories and introductions. I help me see where I need improvement and it also helps to see what type of storylines do people enjoy. The most helpful ones are the comments that give suggestions on how I could take the story or even giving me a whole

other take on a story. I started giving good feedback/ comments but these past two weeks my schedule got really packed and other things happened that caused me to fall behind. Luckily, I think I finally organized my schedule again and I can get back on track. I find it hard at times to give helpful feedback, therefore, I still need more improvement in that area. I enjoy reading other stories and kind of get a sense of who they are based on their writing style. In the future, I need to improve my skills in giving more helpful feedback, feedback that includes suggestions and other ways to improve their stories. I also found it hard to do the feedback assignment in which we became the character maybe I can try to do that in the future.

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Introduction to a Science,Travel and Hiking enthusiast!

City view of Guanajuato, Mexico Taken by me Hello everyone!! My name is Monica Avila, I was born in Guanajuato, Mexico and moved to the U.S. when I was five, I can speak Spanish, English and a little bit of Portuguese (currently learning). I am a senior here at OU (Wow can't believe I'm saying senior time flies by so fast). I am a Health and Exercise Science major. I'll be graduating this spring, my plans so far are to take a year off and work and travel a little maybe go for masters in health promotion but I'm still not sure yet. In the future, I hope to go to grad school for physical therapy and work with either the elderly or children. I love science and learning about the human body. The way the human body works and manages to keep us alive is so amazing, learning all the mechanics of it is one of my favorite parts of my major. Therefore, some of my favorite classes have been Human Anatomy and Exercise Physiology. Christ the Redeemer in Rio de Janeiro, B

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Week 9 Story: Gandalia and Dhrit

When Princess Gandalia was only five months old she suffered from a terrible fever. The king and queen feared for the death of their only daughter. The fever was very strong and would not go away, after two weeks the doctors were finally able to stop it however because of the length of time her body was exposed to high temperatures it caused her to go blind. Gandalia never let her loss of sight affect her life. When she was young she played like all other children and quickly adapted living without the ability to see. If you did not know her personally you would never know she was blind. Gandalia was homeschooled as her parents feared for her safety so she never had many outside friends except for her family and the palace workers. Her favorite hobby was to read romance novels, she would often daydream about one day finding her soulmate, falling in love and living happily ever after like all the characters in her novels. She would often pester her cousins to tell her stories a

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